User:Alopr12/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Artificial heart

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because of medical interest and how important it plays a role in the medicine and technology field. The innovation of an artificial heart provides many benefits as well as explain how rigorous and stressful this process is for the physician, patient, and close ones. This matters because not much emphasize has been shown about how the patient feels in this process. Further, my preliminary impression of this article was intriguing and explains a solid background about this subject however, there is a lack of the emotional aspect of this innovation.

Evaluate the article
There is some outdated information that could be re-edited with more recent events and research done. Such as recent cardio vascular surgeries and how the patient felt after. As well, there are some gaps between the years and topics published. Nonetheless, part of this article provided an excellent structure of background on what is the artificial heart, its history, important individuals, and major events that happened during this years regarding the innovation. The content was well developed, and tone and balance could require more focus if it's more formal. This article included plenty of sources and reference which were great but some outdated. In a way, this does help and give insight how in the older times this was discovered and how it put to work but there should also be recent references to demonstrate how far this innovation has come. In the part of organization and writing quality some areas are well written, still there are some paragraphs that are hard to understand the main idea. Next, the images and media there are a few but play an important role to be able to visualize this invention and go hand in hand with the paragraph next to the image. This Wikipedia discusses this topic different from the way we've talked about in class in the sense of how in class we cover many important topics regarding innovation and how culture views this. This article doesn't cover much of this aspect which could be added, and help to comprehend this idea better. Overall, this article has solid informational parts needed to understand this innovation yet it can be improved by adding recent sources, filling the gap of the emotional aspect of the patient and how this could be view in other cultures. I would assess this article completeness by looking into recent discoveries about this innovation, research how the artificial heart has been seen in other places round the world, and structure the information in a way it covers all the main important points.