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Article Evalution: Musica Universalis

Needs more information in general Missing citations for "Use in Recent Music" so Placement of some references are randomly placed within article. "Max Heindel's Rosicrucian writings" lacks depth in descriptions
 * information was prevelant but limited, needs more in depth description
 * Recommend more examples to make connections
 * Bulleted list item
 * Missing citations
 * Use of transitions in between topics
 * an example is given but not cited

possible topics to look further into Asteroseismology Esoteric cosmology Harmonices Mundi Orbital resonance This Is My Father's World Titius–Bode law Ray of Creation Sacred geometry Shabd Space music Thema Mundi
 * Orbital Resonance
 * Mudana Humana


 * Referencing to terminology without futher cllarifications

Article Evaluation : John Wallis This article is well organized but could use some more referencing and citations. There appeared to be grammatical errors that can be adjusted Reserach collision of bodies what did Wallis believe what were his views what did he criticize if anything accomplisments theories what feedback was he given on his beliefs does article have any unsupported facts Write about: Wallis's conical edge is a ruled surface given by the parametric equations:

{\displaystyle x=v\cos u,\quad y=v\sin u,\quad z=c{\sqrt {a^{2}-b^{2}\cos ^{2}u}}.} {\displaystyle x=v\cos u,\quad y=v\sin u,\quad z=c{\sqrt {a^{2}-b^{2}\cos ^{2}u}}.} where a, b and c are constants.

Wallis's conical edge is also a kind of right conoid.

Figure 2 shows that the Wallis's conical edge is generated by a moving line.

Wallis's conical edge is named after the English mathematician John Wallis, who was one of the first to use Cartesian methods to study conic sections.[1]

external links to research Wikiquote has quotations related to: John Wallis The Correspondence of John Wallis in EMLO "Wallis, John (1616-1703)". Dictionary of National Biography. London: Smith, Elder & Co. 1885–1900. O'Connor, John J.; Robertson, Edmund F., "John Wallis", MacTutor History of Mathematics archive, University of St Andrews. Galileo Project page "Archival material relating to John Wallis". UK National Archives. Edit this at Wikidata

Suggested topics to research more in depth:
 * Musical theory: how does this reference back to Wallis
 * Can discuss the controvery with hobbes, who agreed to disagree with his point of views
 * His knowledge with different mathamatical concepts

Article Evaluation for Ancient Greek astronomy Article is structured but needs condensing in material included, having so many external links is distracting grammar errors can be fixed length is fine just as mentioned, condensing it a little may help keep concepts clear.

In the Iliad and the Odyssey, Homer refers to the following celestial objects:

the constellation Boötes the star cluster Hyades  go more in detail the constellation Orion the star cluster Pleiades Sirius, the Dog Star the constellation Ursa Major

Eudoxan astronomy

Suggestions for editing:

Some content to consider in the remainder of these article drafts is to choose the most relevant topics to the subject omit wordiness if any sections are lengthy try tieing back concepts or key words to the subject remember to also check grammar summarize if possible Fact check for any redundent or reboust facts that maynot pertain to article

use more citations and revise any citations that may be inccorect

Ancient Greek anatomy :additional suggested information to incorporate • discuss how ancient astronomers only studied the motion of planets wih no connections to its physical characteristics

•consider how these times greeks and romans established universities and institutions that focused their areas of study on astronomy • Hipparchus- studied the location in which the sun covered the stars when fall transitions into spring •Correlation with scientific reasoning which was a concept that incorporated to observe if the earth is in motion. •stars lie far but seemed impossble for researcheres at the time to confirm the assumption because science was still being compared to philisophical perspectives at the time which is why many remained to believe that the sun revolved around the early when it was less scientific. To them they believeed that the earth was not a part of the heavens becuase the celestial objects were deemeed to be bright points of light in addition to the earth which was considered to be a nonluminant object that was made of rock and mud. •Major contributions Greeks had to astronomy - Aristotles theories and research

-The idea that stars and the sun and the moon are fixed in spherelike shapes that rotate within each other

- Astronomer plato suggested that the stars formed the outer layer that was surrounded by the sun and mood and earth.

- contribution to prediction of seasons and production of crops, weather, theories dervied from observations Source 1,4,: Cite this source In chicago or mla style: http://ircamera.as.arizona.edu/NatSci102/NatSci/lectures/greekast.htm

https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/29978151

John wallis Revision suggestions: - discuss risk of plagerism with Newtons works -discuss how his points of views differed from those of newton - discuss how he wrote the first survey of mathematical learning in england where he discussed the hindu arabic system

SOURCE 2: Guicciardini, Niccolò. "JOHN WALLIS AS EDITOR OF NEWTON'S MATHEMATICAL WORK." Notes and Records of the Royal Society of London 66, no. 1 (2012): 3-17. http://www.jstor.org/stable/41723282.

cite this in Mla:http://www.jstor.org/stable/41723282

Source 3:

Stedall, Jacqueline A. (2001). Of Our Own Nation: John Wallis's Account of Mathematical Learning in Medieval England. Historia Mathematica /, 28, 73.

Musica universalis revision suggestions:

-Frequencies -ryhthm - harmony -electromagnetic waves