User:AltusLinguini/Antonio Giménez-Rico/AguaCertamen! Peer Review

General info
AltusLinguini
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:AltusLinguini/Antonio_Gim%C3%A9nez-Rico?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Antonio Giménez-Rico
 * Antonio Giménez-Rico

Evaluate the drafted changes
There are more than a couple of changes that AltusLinguini made in their sandbox draft that I think would fill some holes in their article. For one, the introductory section could have used some more work and that is exactly what AltusLinguini did. I liked the single sentence addition to the start. As well as that, I think that the Early Life and Background section was a good addition given the fact that the article did not previously have a section like that. I like the consistency and the additions of sources and proper citations throughout the new introductory section, but not just that, but throughout the whole article as well.

The additions to the "Career" section of the article are fitting given the parts that were added, namely 'Dressed in Blue'. Adding on to that, one of the bigger overall additions was very well done, the table of filmography. The colors that were added to color code the responses to each of the columns was well done as well as adding a column for each of the sources that were used in each of the sections. I think that given the complexity of the article previous to the additions, the additions that were made were well done and fitting. The information that was added was necessary and furthered the depth of the article.