User:AltusLinguini/Antonio Giménez-Rico/JovialCarrot Peer Review

General info
Altus Linguini
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:AltusLinguini/Antonio_Gim%C3%A9nez-Rico?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead obviously needs a lot more material, but the first sentence is good! And there's a lot of material to work with in the body that you could just write a few summary sentences about to add to the lead.

The career section is well written, chronological, and contains a lot of relevant information. I think this shouldn't need much work

The section on death does not feel needed as its own header. Maybe this section could be about personal life, if that is known, or general themes of his material and how they might connect to his death/reactions to his death.

I think this page has a great start, with good formatting and fine sources, but more material could be added specifically about the relevance/impact of his work to the queer community! It would be cool to work in some sources from class if you can find connections there.