User:AltusLinguini/Antonio Giménez-Rico/Ricekrispyyy Peer Review

General info
(provide username) AltusLinguini
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:AltusLinguini/Antonio Giménez-Rico
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Antonio Giménez-Rico

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead: The lead section is currently only a sentence long and is about his occupation. I feel like the lead section could use more information about some of his most prominent works and maybe what themes he is known for working on during his career.

Content: I can't tell if AltusLinguini has already published their sandbox draft, but I think the content is the same on the sandbox draft and the published article. I think the content is all relevant and up to date throughout the article. The only thing I would want to see more of would be information in the lead section about Giménez-Rico's life, career, and legacy. Perhaps just a few sentences laying out what you will talk about in the following Career section. I also wonder if the Death section has to be its own section if there is just not enough information to make it more than one sentence.

Tone and Balance: The tone and balance of this article is neutral and concise. There is no confusion on what is being referred to, and there is no superfluous information.

Sources and References: From what I can tell, there are no new references that have been added.

Organization: The organization of the article makes sense, chronologically. The only thing that sticks out to me, though, is that the Career and Filmography sections of the article are significantly lengthier than all the other sections like the Lead and Death sections.

Images and Media: There is no image, but I think adding an image (if available) would be a good way to add some visual media and put a name to a face.