User:Alv5269/Ivory trade/Vlo1989 Peer Review

General info
Alv5269
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Alv5269/Ivory trade/Bibliography :
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Ivory trade

Evaluate the drafted changes
The source you provided is appropriate and relevant to the topic, but what exactly will your contribution be to the article about the ivory trade business? Will it be about how ivory trade has an environmental impact on Africa in terms of elephants and other sources of ivory? Or perhaps how ivory trade is an issue because it’s an illegal trade in Africa and abroad? I think with your source you’ll be able to find some good information that will help guide you to your contribution on your article about ivory trade.