User:Alwyn2105/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Character mask

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because I was having a hard time finding an article to improve. I'm not an expert in anything so It's a little difficult to find something that I could do better. When I first came across this article I was mortified at how long this article was and thought I could use it for this assignment.

Evaluate the article
This article "Character Mask" is somewhat of a mystery to me as to why it exists. I tried reading the first line which included the definition of "character mask". Unfortunately, no matter how many times I reread the line I couldn't quite figure out what a character mask and had to look up the definition elsewhere. I really believe that the authors of this article could put more effort into making the content more understandable to someone who is already less knowledgeable about this subject. I also believe that this article is unnecessary long for a Wikipedia article. Certain sections of this article like "The New Left and the Red Army Faction" and "Zizek" don't need to be included. These sections go on a tangent and get in the way of understanding what a "character mask" is. The article has also been marked as including original research which is discouraged for Wikipedia articles.