User:Alycapybaraslay/Association of Legal Writing Directors/Aaashlle Peer Review

General info
(provide username) Alycapybaraslay: Association of Legal Writing Directors
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Association of Legal Writing Directors
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Association of Legal Writing Directors

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Very vague, would recommend adding to the original article. Add to the lead, create a structure, implement some informative scopes.

Some grammar issue with integrating quotes. Should keep consistent flow/tone.

Elaborate more on the information already given (importance, impact, purpose). Sources are very limited, expand on information gathering.

Links are very helpful and have potential in structure building but note what has purpose in having a link (i.e. "organization", "lawyers", and listed nations don't necessarily require hyperlinks). Avoid plagiarism and directly integrating word-for-word phrases from the official webpage.