User:Alys62


 * 3

Short-term checklist:
 * Work on Ghanaian anti-LGBT bill and probably expand LGBT rights in Ghana along the way
 * Grammar/writing conventions
 * Update and add new developments
 * Consider reducing number of citations in the introduction
 * Why is it repetitive
 * Clause semicolons?
 * Why are half the sentences almost completely copy pasted from news articles
 * Mention (not in intro) that Akufo-Addo previously expressed willingness to give presidential assent if the bill had popular support, but is currently refusing to sign it until a legal challenge to the bill (elaborate) has been addressed.

Long-term checklist:
 * Actually learn how to cite and link hyperlink

Expand:
 * Charles Xue
 * Chinese Apartment Art
 * Rift lake
 * William Osgoode (also check end of article, potentially incorrect verb tense)

Should I put this on my talk page instead?