User:Alyssa.Bustos/User:Angelesmmm/Andrés Curruchich/Alyssa.Bustos Peer Review

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Reviewing Angeles's Wikipedia page on Andrés Curruchich.
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 * User:Angelesmmm/Andrés Curruchich
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This Wiki article is missing a lead. You could take the first two to three sentences of the Biography and make those into an overarching lead that tells your readers who this person is or was and what they are known for. It just needs to be something brief to clue the reader in before they read the whole article.

The content of the article is relevant and gives a clear understanding to who this person was from a neutral standpoint. There is one spelling error where I believe the word should be "native" instead naive in reference to the Maya. Something that could help this page feel rich with relevant content, or give it some length is the more information in the education portion. You could provide more information on the artists that Curruchich trained. Did he have a school that he taught at? Was there a classroom setting? How long did he teach? Did any of his apprentices go on to be career painters?

In this list of references, there is only one to click on that takes us to the source. It would be good to have a few more that are easily accessible to the reader, rather than going to search for the exact source you referenced.

This article is well organized and gives the reader a clear understanding of who this person was. With a little more information on his significance, this article will be complete.