User:AlyssaKayS/Poverty in Mexico/Ella311 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

AlyssaKayS


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:AlyssaKayS/Poverty_in_Mexico?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Poverty in Mexico

Evaluate the drafted changes
The sources seem really good, information seems good and applicable in the article. However, I would work on revising some of this, especially the first paragraph. Some of it seems a little clunky and I also noticed some grammatical errors throughout. Maybe try reading it aloud once and fix some places that don't flow that well/\.