User:AlyssaKayS/Poverty in Mexico/Hitomi1252 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

AlyssaKayS, Olive461


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:AlyssaKayS/Poverty_in_Mexico?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Poverty in Mexico

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

It is nice to have a comprehensive overview of Mexican women and their borders. Through your Wikipedia article, I understood why Mexican women leave their home country and cross to the United States and the problems and risks they face. However, I think that you can make your article better by adding several sections and photos. Also, you can add more explanation about the following questions;

[13] After 9/11 the borders got even more dangerous.: Why does it become more dangerous for Mexican women to cross from Mexico to the United States since 11 September?

[14] People get PTSD after crossing the border.: Why do they tend to get PTSD after crossing the border?

[15] Many are forced to pass through the desert.: What route do Mexican women crossing the border take to their destination within Mexico?