User:Alyssadebragga/Original Starbucks/Ryleeg Peer Review

General info
Alyssadebragga on Original Starbucks
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Alyssadebragga/Original Starbucks
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Original Starbucks

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * 1. Is everything in the article relevant to the article topic? Is there anything that distracted you?
 * - I liked the additions made to the current article. Everything is relevant and straightforward. It would be beneficial to add another section on something about how the store operates today, any news it made, etc. It has a somewhat abrupt ending that is slightly distracting.
 * 2. Is the article neutral? Are there any claims, or frames, that appear heavily biased toward a particular position? Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?
 * - The article is neutral and no biased claims are made.
 * 4. Check the citations. Do the links work? Does the source support the claims in the article?
 * - IMPORTANT: No citations inputed throughout your additions to the article! From the articles you used, maybe you can elaborate more or find more sources.
 * 5. Is each fact supported by an appropriate, reliable reference? Where does the information come from? Are these neutral sources? If biased, is that bias noted?
 * - Need supported information, seems correct but not sure which sources you used in research.
 * 6. Is any information out of date? Is anything missing that should be added?
 * - Optional: It would be nice to add an updated article into the mix, but since it is has a significant history it makes sense to focus on past articles.

Overall, I liked the additions you made, as they are an improvement from the original article. Definitely needs citations added and possibly a variety of sources (you could find another and add another section?). The tone is good ad unbiased. This article would benefit from original pictures if you are able to find/use them. Note: I think the confusion between the first location and second location is kind of a niche Seattle fact, so another section could be on that!