User:Alyssancor/Writer's block/A.staleto Peer Review


 * everything is organized and sectioned off clearly for the reader to understand what is going to be talked about next -> feels like a true wikipedia page!
 * other than adding citations where needed, I feel like this was properly done and it provided good information to the reader with the evidence to back it up
 * overall, very well written!

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

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 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
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