User:Alysse98/Cheela Smith/BrianaMazzocchi Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Alysse98
 * User:Alysse98/sandbox

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer? yes.
 * Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic? yes.
 * Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections? yes
 * Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article? Could use a little more info.
 * Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed? Nice and concise.

Content
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added relevant to the topic? yes
 * Is the content added up-to-date? yes
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong? everything fits well but needs a little more info added in.

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added neutral? yes
 * Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position? no.
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented? no.
 * Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another? no.

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information? References need to be added in.
 * Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic? yes, good job recording what she has worked on.
 * Are the sources current? As current as it can get
 * Check a few links. Do they work? no links added in yet

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read?
 * Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors?
 * Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic?

Images and Media
Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media


 * Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic? yes
 * Are images well-captioned? Could use a caption that explains the relevance of the image.
 * Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations? I think so.
 * Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way? yes!

For New Articles Only
If the draft you're reviewing is a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.


 * Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject? those still need to be added in
 * How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject? still need sources.
 * Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles? yes!
 * Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable? not yet.

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete? yes!
 * What are the strengths of the content added? The lead is very informative and the image is a good compliment to it.
 * How can the content added be improved? Just add some more content!