User:Am0ria1/Housing in the United States/Angiesyz Peer Review

General info
Am0ria1
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Am0ria1/Housing_in_the_United_States?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Housing in the United States

Evaluate the drafted changes
Here are my suggestions:


 * 1) Citation: make sure you work is carefully cited using the " button next to the link button, all of your sources should be reflected under the reference section.
 * 2) For the first half of the draft, make sure you are citing all sentences with unknown information. I really like your points, comprehensively describe the significance of housing development and its relationship with wellness. It seems like it is not for the lead section, I think giving it a subtitle about poor housing would be very nice.
 * 3) There are quantitative data presenting throughout the original article, maybe augmenting some new data collected or analyzed in recent years, for example, the increased risk of chronic illness, cancer or infectious disease for those living in poor conditioned housing.
 * 4) Your content is neutral and the tone suits the original page very well.
 * 5) Don't forget to double-check the grammar and spelling for final draft, make sure each sentences is complete.

Great work! I'm excited to see how your work will integrate into the wikipedia page.