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Self-Reflection In Meditation -
'''Often during meditation humans experience introspection. When the brain experiences introspection, it is self-reflecting upon itself. The action is described as "the looking into our own minds and reporting what we there discover". '''

'''A study done by Cara Rosaen and Rita Benn analyzed middle school students who had not meditated prior to the study. Researchers found young people meditating for the first time experienced "improvement in skills indicative of emotional intelligence (self-control, self-reflection/awareness, and flexibility in emotional response)". The study concluded saying that middle school students who meditated for the first time experienced "increased state of restful alertness and greater capacity for self-reflection, self-control, and flexibility as well as improved academic performance.'''

Anguyen and A.cook peer editing
The first sentence in the second paragraph is incomplete/ need rewording.

The second paragraph is done well and is clear where the first needs work or possible consider leaving it out.

Edit by Alex C.
Combine the first two sentences in the second paragraph or replace the word "that", because it sounds like an unfinished paragraph. Where is it going????? References come after the period I think.