User:Amahaja1/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
GI cocktail

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I have chosen to evaluate this article because while it provides information regarding the contents of the GI cocktail, it provides little information regarding its use. I have seen the GI cocktail used in the hospital setting to treat indigestion however there is question regarding its efficacy over antacids alone. I would like my edits to provide a more comprehensive overview of the GI cocktail.

Evaluate the article
Lead section + content:

The article is primarily missing a strong lead section and comprehensive content section. In the lead section, the contents of the GI cocktail are introduced and it is mentioned that there is question regarding its efficacy over antacids alone however the article doesn't provide information past this.

Images and media:

The article does not currently provide any helpful images or media.

Organization and writing quality + tone and balance:

The article is currently divided into 2 short paragraphs. Writing quality is good. Tone is neutral and unbiased.

Sources and references:

The article currently lists 5 references from the early 2000's. One of the references is questionable and is no longer available to view, and most others are from books. Sources don't seem to be as diverse and comprehensive as they could be.

Talk page:

There is one comment addressing the questionable efficacy of the GI cocktail which furthermore proves that this point needs to be addressed on the wiki page.

Overall status:

The article is currently classified as a stub article. The strengths of the article are that the writing quality is good and it is off to a good start. The article can be improved by expanding upon its efficacy and current use (or not) in the medical field. The article is currently underdeveloped.

Work plan:

My plan is to improve the article is as follows:

Lead Section: Rework the lead section to define the topic and provide a concise overview of the GI cocktail. This includes adding to the introductory sentence and including a brief description of the article’s major sections (described under “Content”).

Content: I plan to add up-to-date information regarding conditions for which the GI cocktail has been used, side effects of the GI cocktail, and addressing studies that claim the GI cocktail is no more effective than an antacid alone.

Tone and Balance: Maintain a neutral point of view while reworking the article and providing additional information regarding the GI cocktail.

Sources and References: Expand upon sources and references already provided in the article by providing ones that are more current and up-to-date. Additionally, using resources from peer-reviewed articles, medical journals, etc.

Organization and Writing Quality: Maintain a clear and professional tone throughout while keeping the article concise, clear, and easy to read.

Images and Media: If applicable, provide images and media that enhance understanding of the GI cocktail