User:Amaiya99/Causes of autism/Jnsellers Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Amaiya99


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Amaiya99/Causes_of_autism?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The first sentence you've added is great. You've hit some of the most prevalent challenges that one with ASD may deal with. I think the wording of the second sentence can be worded differently. You could also consider throwing in something that briefly mentions the differences in boys and girls diagnosed or for the girls, the lack of proper diagnosing due to masking.

Reply: Thank you for your input. I will be sure to make those changes. I appreciate it!