User:AmandaLBritt/sandbox

Amanda's Work Log

 * March 4, 2019, Set up the sandbox and selected Knitting Club as my article assignment. Then continued by reading information about my article. (3 hours)
 * March 5, 2019, review my selected article and corrected punctuation, spelling and grammar errors. (2 hours)
 * April 7, 2019, added photos of yarn and knitted crafts. (2 hours)

Heather's Comments
3.11.2019- Hi Amanda. Thanks for getting this all set up! It's looking good. But I'm not sure what punctuation and grammar you fixed. The actual Wikipedia article on Knitting Clubs doesn't show those changes in "history." And that's a good thing too, since you're supposed to make changes in this Sandbox first so you can get feedback and then you move the changes to the mainspace. Can you please copy and paste the part of the article you're working on into this Sandbox and note what things you're changing (maybe by bolding it?) Also notice that the biggest issue is citations. What part most needs cited? How will you find sources for it? Finally, can you include the full MLA citation (author, title, date) for the source you found below?

Possible Sources:
Add sources from the Butte College Library, especially GVRL- http://go.galegroup.com.butte.idm.oclc.org/ps/start.do?p=GVRL&u=orov49112