User:Amandacorcoran0217/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Cain Velasquez

https://www.f4wonline.com/news/other-wrestling/cain-velasquez-booked-into-santa-clara-county-jail-following-shooting-wwe-ufc-aaa

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
The reason I chose this article is because I am interested in crime and I always wonder why people commit the crimes they do. This article is also a newer article that was published on March 1,2022.

Evaluate the article
The articles overall status is that Cain Velasquez was arrested and booked on attempted murder charge. The articles strength's is that it gives you all the details that they know as of now and once this case closes there will be another article letting us know what the outcome is. The article can be improved by telling the readers a little more information on exactly what happened but then again i am sure they are still investigating. I feel that the article us well developed, the reason for this is because there is support within the article and also there are transition words and I feel that makes articles better and more interesting, the article is also easy to read and not too lengthy.

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