User:Amandamilford/Fiber analysis/Bella LC Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Amandamilford


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Amandamilford/Fiber_analysis?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Fiber analysis

Evaluate the drafted changes
I really like what you have added to the lead so far!

Overall, the article is very short and I think there is a lot that could be added. Here are some suggestions:

- Expand on the methods section

- Make a section outlining all the of the different kinds of fibers

- Make a section outlining of the different dyes

- How the types of fiber and dyes affect fiber analysis

I didn't notice any spelling or citation mistakes in the article. But I think that adding more detail to the article would really help to strengthen it.