User:Amanzo2/Homelessness in California/Gakeiiyyh Peer Review

General info
Amanzo2
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Amanzo2/Homelessness in California
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Homelessness in California

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Content, Tone and Balance
Youth: I think it is a good idea to add more recent information to it

Women & LGBTQ+: I believe this would be a very informative part to this article, I look forward to read this section!

Public bathrooms: I appreciate the edit you have already made, which includes up-to-date information and very neutral.

Overall
I really like the idea of adding an intersectional perspective to this article! Homelessness in California is a widespread public issue and is usually not related to gender or sexuality. I believe your edit would be very insightful and interesting, encouraging people to think about it from a different angle. I am exited to read the women and LGBTQ+ sections!- Yahui