User:Amanzo2/Homelessness in California/Mundozurdo Peer Review

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Amanzo2 (Annabelle)
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Amanzo2/Homelessness in California
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Homelessness in California:

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hey Annabelle,

I think your planned additions to the article sound really phenomenal, especially as there's a lack of discussion on the complex relationship between various identities and housing insecurity. Moreover, your contribution to the section on public bathrooms provides some great context in addition to being well-written and neutral in tone.

I agree that the lead section could use some edits as it's quite dense. It may be worth seeing whether some of the lead can be moved to other sections (or new sections). I skimmed through the remainder of the original article and it seems fairly well-structured as of now but there are some references to "current" events that are a bit outdated and may need to be updated.

All in all, I think this is a great start to the edits and please let me know if you need any further feedback as you continue to write.

Thanks! - Andrew

n.b. Incidentally, I wrote a research paper on the economic outcomes of queer folks in the U.S. and one of my sections focused on housing insecurity - I know you focus on California but some of these papers may have some useful information! I've included a few of the papers below and I hope they can be of help! I apologize that I don't have the links, just the citations as they appeared in my bibliography...

Badgett, M., Choi, K., Wilson, B. (2019). LGBT Poverty in the United States: A study of

differences between sexual orientation and gender identity groups. Los Angeles, CA: The

Williams Institute, UCLA School of Law.

Choi, S., Wilson, B., Shelton, J., & Gates, G. (2015). Serving Our Youth 2015: The Needs and

Experiences of Lesbian, Gay, Bisexual, Transgender, and Questioning Youth

Experiencing Homelessness. Los Angeles, CA: The Williams Institute, UCLA School of

Law.

Wilson, B., Choi, S., Harper, G., Lightfoot, M., Russell, S., Meyer, I. (2020) Homelessness

among LGBT Adults in the US. Los Angeles, CA: The Williams Institute, UCLA School

of Law.