User:Amanzo2/Immigration detention in the United States/MarlaGuerra Peer Review

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AManzo2
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 * User:Amanzo2/Immigration detention in the United States
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 * Immigration detention in the United States

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hey! Great job on the current plan of action, it seems very well-structured! I think updating outdated statistics is always crucial, especially within this ever-evolving issue, which I believe will significantly enhance the article's credibility. Similarly, fact-checking unsubstantiated claims is always commendable, as this would combat the influence of possible misinformation. However, I think the inclusion of a women's migrant issues section would be an amazing addition! Its absence, considering the well-documented violence they face within this spaces shouldn't be ignored, so I'm really glad to see you prioritize this. This section will undoubtedly enrich the article and be extremely beneficial to future readers. One small note, but I think the article could also benefit from a few photos of what the inside of these detention centers look like and the conditions that migrants are forced to endure; I think this is something readers should be aware about. However, your sources look highly credible and overall your plan demonstrates a thoughtful and insightful approach, great job!