User:AmariHau/Video modeling/Candyw5268 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username)

AmariHau


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:AmariHau/Video_modeling?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Video modeling

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

·        The terms that you have defined do not always have a definition attached to them and there are words that were not defined that you may want to check on as well

·        The links for your reference did not yield a result when I clicked on the link, this may be my computer error, this also happened with the items in red as well.

·        I would add more references and be sure to embedded them in, so they are numbered

·        Visuals would be great to add in as well to break up the information

·        I loved your steps and maybe you could find or make a chart with the information