User:AmariHau/Video modeling/NPierre11 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:AmariHau


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:AmariHau/Video_modeling?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Video modeling

Evaluate the drafted changes
Dear AmariHau,

I definitely enjoyed reviewing your article. I like how you explained what Video Modeling is. I also see that you have provided definition links to the words that you have use. I also see that you have posted directions on how to implement video modeling, and added in current references in regards to providing information on Video Modeling. Make sure that you add in the information about Video Modeling under article body, and add in an introductory sentence to introduce us to the topic. Make sure to add in more information in regards to classification, that way, the reader know what you mean. I enjoyed reviewing your article and looking forward to seeing the changes.