User:Amarjb/Civic technology companies/Justin.tsubasa Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Amarjb


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Amarjb/Civic_technology_companies?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Evaluate the drafted changes
- There should be a colon after "New civic tech initiatives" in the first section, so it should be formatted

New civic tech initiatives:


 * 1) Baltimore county is working on a dashboard for citizens to view traffic stops online.
 * 2) New Mexico is likely to spend 1 billion to develop internet infrastructure across the state.

- "After it's use in 2008 in Kenya, this civic technology was used for global crises." has a grammatical error, the apostrophe in "its" should be removed.

After its use in 2008 in Kenya, this civic technology was used for global crises.

- The third sentence under the Rave Mobile Safety subsection is missing a comma after "Covid 19". Should be formatted as follows.

During COVID-19, Rave Mobile Safety expanded its current collaborations with public safety agencies in every state.

- The article draft does an excellent job in providing several citations and remaining neutral throughout, with the exception to a few grammatical error pointed out in this peer review, the article has a nice "encyclopedic" tone to it.