User:AmarraD./Ascension Missionary Baptist Church/Thouston7 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Amarra D.


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:AmarraD./Ascesnsion Missionary Baptist Church


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * n/a

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead is concise and addresses the main points in the article. The mere mention of covid makes the me know that the article is up to date. The content is relevant to the topic. I would love to see if you could add more to the history of the church. I feel like you can definitely add a little more information in that section. The article remains neutral throughout and isn't biased. I would refrain from using the church's website. Because the information on that specific site could be seen as biased, it may not be seen as a reliable and therefore, not recommended. All of your sources come from the same site, so I would suggest finding some new articles such as New York Times or Commercial Appeal. You could even use library's online catalog to see if they have any information, but I understand if you can't find other resources. It does address Wikipedia's content gap by discussing African American history and Religion. I would love for you to add at least one more photo if you can.

Overall, the article is pretty good. I feel like the minor suggestions will better the article even more. I will be you draft to help me finish my draft as well.