User:Amassey1/Gas chromatography/Maskewmo Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Amassey1)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Amassey1/Gas chromatography - Wikipedia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Gas chromatography - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead looks like it has been edited a little but it is overly detailed. In the first sentence, take out chromatography and add "technique" to help define GC. Take out the second paragraph and preparative chromatography and moving that to the methods section.

The content of this article is relevant and up to date but it could be organized in a better way. Maybe structing the use of the instrument from start to finish will help reader understand its process and what its doing at the same time. The history section could use some work, it could be shortened. In the autosampler section talk about the main types: liquid, head space and SPME.

However this article is very balanced and neutral, information could be a little clearer but this a very good article. The first source requires payment to read the book. I don't know how reliable that is to the reader. Readers want to read where the information comes from so try to find a website that has this book available for free online reading. The other sources seem to be reliable. Images are good as well but the layout could be better. Adding a video of GC could also be helpful. (~maskew)