User:Amba4eva/Sumantra Ghoshal/Lnavarrete123 Peer Review

General info
Amba4va
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Amba4eva/Sumantra Ghoshal
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Sumantra Ghoshal

Evaluate the drafted changes
I really like how much work has been put into the draft of the Sumantra Ghoshal article assign to you. One of the things I did notice is that everything in your draft replaces the work that has already been there. I do like that you have added a death section because the article does not have a section about his death. I do like that everything is cited and there are no dead links or broken links in the drafted article. I would recommend to leave some of the work that has been done by the previous editors and had in the "death section" and new or addition information you believe was left out or missing. I also think the table should be left in to understand the "forms of the International enterprise" section.