User:Amba4eva/Sumantra Ghoshal/Sdavis2023 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Amba4eva


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Amba4eva/Sumantra Ghoshal - Wikipedia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Sumantra Ghoshal - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
The content added is relevant to the topic and after looking at the sources appears to be up to date. You mentioned Christopher Bartlett in the article and how he and Ghoshal went to Harvard together. I think if you moved this to lead where it mentions some of the work that they did together because until I got to the reward section, I did not understand his importance in the Biography of Ghoshal.

The article remains neutral throughout, however there is a section in the works portion under Bad Management Theories are Destroying Good Management Practices that I think might need to be elaborated on, "Ghoshal is in the school of thoughts that management theorists should not treat the study of business as physical science because the two field of studies are very distinct academic disciplines."

I did not see any viewpoints that were overrepresented or underrepresented she is brief but to the point throughout the article.

All of the citations look good, and the links all work when taking you to an additional Wikipedia page of source. I did find that the source for [4] just takes you to the Magazine website not to the specific article that you are referencing from that magazine. I also had to subscribe to The Economist for source [11]. Due to this I was not able to factcheck the sources for those articles. The sources used int the article support the information be added to the article. Everything being added is followed by a reliable source such as The Guardian, London Business School, Harvard Gazette and many publications from Ghoshal. All of the references come from neutral sources.