User:AmberAmelia101/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Annabelle (film)

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because it needs some revisions and can be improved.

Evaluate the article
The plot section of this article is very lengthy and could be cut down a bit. This section is very long compared to some of the other sections of the article. In the plot, it doesn’t describe when it is taking place which seems like an important part of the movie since there are other movies attached to this one.

The production section can be added on to more since it is pretty short. The development could go more in-depth on why they chose to film about the Annabelle doll and how it is part of the conjuring series. The filming section could also be added on to and there could be more of an explanation of how the set was haunted. It could also explain what the actors were feeling as well.

There could be a background section about how the movie is based on a true story. Can add a link to the page about the real Annabelle in this background section. It can be small but it would add some more context.

There could be more added to the music section of the article and a list of the songs that the filmmakers chose for this film.