User:Ambermrush/LGBT rights in Cuba/Katherineamerica Peer Review

Peer review
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General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? Ambermrush
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: LGBT rights in Cuba

Lead evaluation
The Lead was very concise and clear, and gave a very good overview of the things that are covered later in the article.

Content evaluation
The content was very detailed, and provided lots of good information. I would say try to take out the direct quotes and paraphrase them instead.

Tone and balance evaluation
The tone was very neutral, and there was lots of unbiased information about LGBT rights.

Sources and references evaluation
There are a lot of good sources, however I would try to use less direct quotations.

Organization evaluation
This article is organized in a very logical way.

Overall evaluation
This article is very well done! It is organized very well, and gives lots of very useful information. I would just try to take out the direct quotes, if possible.