User:Amberzsimmo/Lafayette Square (New Orleans)/Sirenreins Peer Review

Lead
The "Lead" is more of a history section. It has nothing to do and doesn't even mention the one other major section within the story. It does present really good information just be sure to cite your sources. I would suggest doing the Lead first but just as an outline for the major things you want to talk and the things you have the most information about. I understand we were under a time crunch so if you need anymore help I am more than willing to help you out.

Content
The one piece of major content is relevant to the topic. I believe it is up to date however I have not researched it and honestly do not plan to unless absolutely necessary. I wish there was more information available about the structure of the square or what is around it or if it plays a significant role in any communities. Just some ideas on things to research and things to look up. If you look around on Wikipedia you can get a pretty good idea of how to structure your article and the information you want to add.

Tone and Balance
We are just stating facts and information we find on the internet so I do not think tone is an issue. I will not comment on Balance because this would get pretty repetitive.

Organization
You main point is separated from the random information which is very good.

Images
No images present from what I can see

General info

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