User:Amberzsimmo/Lafayette Square (New Orleans)/Zospence3 Peer Review

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(Amberzsimmo)


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 * User:Amberzsimmo/Lafayette Square (New Orleans)

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What I am assuming is the intro is a concise good start. It not only talks about the history of the the area but also some starting insight to its location. There does not seem to be a good leading sentence. Maybe start off with a more vague description of what Lafayette Square is and what it entails rather than diving straight into the history. While the introduction covers some good topics to be discussed, especially include some information about Current Day Events in the introduction since that is the only paragraph seen in the article.

The only content section I see is "Current Day Events", therefore the content portion is very up to date and relevant to the topic. There is some missing content in regards to the history of the area and location, which are mentioned in the introduction. It would be a good idea to make these two categories have their own sections where you go into details of how Lafayette began or how it got that name.

The content added does a very good job of remaining neutral and unbiased. None of the claims are heavily biased. There is no persuasion occurring, just good details of the festival held in the area.

Almost none of the content is backed by reliable sources. Although there is one source to date, there should be a source after every sentence that unless it is about geographical location. I see that there are reminders to fact check, which is good; just make sure to add the citation. The one source very up to date and works efficiently The content is also paraphrased very well into the editors own words.

There seem to be no grammatical or spelling errors in the content added. The content seems to be organized well seeing that the material under the heading relates to what the heading says.

The article has no images and could use some images of Lafayette Square in present day and previously in time, also maybe try to add a picture of the Square during the festival if it can be found, since that is a primary topic of this article.

Overall this is a good start to an article. It is very short so it is hard to critique and give suggestions because there is not much to go on. However, what is there is very good and thorough.