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Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title
 * Sex robot
 * Article Evaluation
 * The article has a very brief lead section at the beginning that could definitely be expanded on. There also is no formal definition of what a sex robot is before the article jumps straight into lexicology and history. For the most part, all the information is cited, but there are a few paragraphs with absolutely no citations. Overall, the content is relevant and written neutrally, although I believe a lot of the categories could be expanded.
 * Sources
 * https://thehumanist.com/magazine/july-august-2017/features/the-future-of-sex/
 * https://mitpress.mit.edu/books/robot-sex
 * https://srh.bmj.com/content/familyplanning/44/3/161.full.pdf
 * https://mitpress.mit.edu/books/robot-sex
 * https://srh.bmj.com/content/familyplanning/44/3/161.full.pdf

Option 2

 * Article title
 * Fencing
 * Article Evaluation
 * The fencing article has more information than some other ones because it is a C-class article, but it is still missing a lot of content on competitive fencing, variants of fencing (like wheelchair fencing), and examples of fencing in popular culture. Very little of the article is cited, and there are entire sections that don't have any sources. Although there could be a lot added to the article, the content that is there is relevant and written in a neutral tone.
 * Sources
 * https://olympics.com/en/featured-news/everything-you-need-to-know-about-fencing-the-equipment-the-weapons-the-athletes
 * https://wheelchairfencing.iwasf.com/about/rules-and-documents/
 * https://www.france24.com/en/live-news/20210724-hungary-s-szilagyi-in-dreamland-after-making-olympic-fencing-history
 * https://wheelchairfencing.iwasf.com/about/rules-and-documents/
 * https://www.france24.com/en/live-news/20210724-hungary-s-szilagyi-in-dreamland-after-making-olympic-fencing-history

Option 3

 * Article title
 * Baijiu
 * Article Evaluation
 * The baijiu article has a heavy focus on the classification of the alcohol by aroma profile and regional variety, and it does not focus at all on the cultural importance of the drink. All the categories seem fairly relevant, but there could definitely be more expansion especially in the "Pricing and the baijiu market," where the article could explore the presence of baijiu outside of just China. Overall, there are relatively few citations, which could definitely be improved upon.
 * Sources
 * http://www.the-buyer.net/people/baijiu-is-a-serious-drink/
 * https://www.theiwsr.com/baijiu-producers-eye-global-expansion/
 * https://www.wboc.com/story/44372721/global-baijiu-market-size-survey-2021-2027-covid-19-analysis-with-top-countries-data-industry-size-future-trends-growth-key-factors-demand-business
 * https://www.theiwsr.com/baijiu-producers-eye-global-expansion/
 * https://www.wboc.com/story/44372721/global-baijiu-market-size-survey-2021-2027-covid-19-analysis-with-top-countries-data-industry-size-future-trends-growth-key-factors-demand-business

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