User:Amckin23/Wendigo/Lauralim13 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username)

Amckin23


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Amckin23/Wendigo?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Wendigo

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Overall, I really like the edits you have made as well as the picture that you added I think that the picture really brings something to the article and it is important for the audience to see what you are referencing, so very good job there. I really liked the body that you are working on I thought it was clear and concise which was nice to read, as well as you held a neutral tone in your writing which was very well thought out. I do think that in the lead section you might need a reference for the "story" that you discuss at the end of the paragraph but other than that good job!