User:Ameylowery/Gashadokuro/Pau190 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ameylowery's Article


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Ameylowery/Gashadokuro
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Gashadokuro

Evaluate the drafted changes
The work was great; it provided a lot of information about the subject. You organized the description well and thoroughly explained what each of them consisted of. I suggest adding the sources where the information came from at the bottom of the page. You could also find the lead section of the article, which would be like the part that grabs the reader's attention; this could help simplify the whole meaning of the article, similar to how a thesis would work. Other than that, the work was done efficiently and nicely.