User:Amir Rafeh/Futurism

Is the article's content relevant to the topic? Are some areas under- or over-developed?
- Yes, the article content is relevant to the topic. It gives strong relation to different periods of time, and different categories. I'd say because this is considered a B class, there are some things over-developed such as Italian Futurism. But there are sections that are still underdeveloped, such as visual art in relation to Futurism

Is it written neutrally?
- Yes this article is written neutrally and does not show any sort of Bias towards or against a particular group or category in relation to Futurism

Does each claim have a citation? Are the citations reliable?
- Yes each claim does have a citation alongside links to other articles and pages on wiki. If a section in the talk page is missing more citations, it would be up to me to fill in those gaps. But for the links and citations that are shown, all seem reliable

Does the article tackle one of Wikipedia's equity gaps (coverage of historically underrepresented or misrepresented populations or subjects)?
Yes, this article tackle one of Wikipedia's equity gaps, specifically the coverage of historically underrepresented subjects, such as in relation to Science fiction, visual arts, philosophy, and history.

What can you add?
- I feel like I can add more in relation to Science fiction, as there may be more in relation to film that should be talked about. Their may be a demand for visual arts that may need more information I'd be happy to contribute to

Russian Futurism
The Russian Association of Proletarian Writers were associated with Russian Futurists during the 1920's in relation to the Futurists theory of "Literature of fact," where Soviet art can be expressed through literacy evolution. The Russian Association of Proletarian Writers advocated for imaginative literature and art, but it lacked contribution to the political and cultural world during the time. Therefore, Proletarian's were advocated to share ideas and principles that expressed literature of fact which showed modern-day problems and events (during their time), such as newspapers, journals and memoirs.

Futurism and Dance
Gino Severini had experienced forms of dancing based on Paris, such as Fuller, Isadora Duncan and Bear Dance (Danse De L’ours) that made him view it as sensory stimulation.

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The Futuristic movement also influenced the concept of dance. Indeed, dancing was interpreted as an alternative way of expressing man's ultimate fusion with the machine. The altitude of a flying plane, the power of a car's motor and the roaring loud sounds of complex machinery were all signs of man's intelligence and excellence which the art of dance had to emphasize and praise. This type of dance is considered futuristic since it disrupts the referential system of traditional, classical dance and introduces a different style, new to the sophisticated bourgeois audience.

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Dancing was shown to be an influence to the Futuristic movement, where it was another way of expressing man's ultimate fusion with the machine. Instances such as a plane flying, or the power and sound of a car's motor and machinery where all signs of men's intelligence and excellence which the art of dance emphasizes and praises. This type of dance introduces a different style and is new to he sophisticated bourgeois audience, where it disrupts the referential system of traditional and classical dance