User:Amir Rafeh/Futurism/Lauteur02 Peer Review

General info
Amir Rafeh
 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Futurism
 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Amir%20Rafeh/Futurism?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template:
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The article has so far been edited in the "Russian Futurism" section, developing this section of the article to include some context. Amir Rafeh includes that the Russian Association of Proletarian Writers were associated with Russian Futurists. This contexts benefits and helps to improve the neutrality on the article, because as is said in Amir Rafeh's draft, the section on Italian Futurism is overdeveloped compared to other sections, and also contains a lot of context in relation to the political alignment of the Italian Futurists. The context also includes a citation to a book where this information is sourced from.

Amir Rafeh says in the draft that the article can be developed in the topic's relation to Science Fiction- I would say that continuing to develop the sections that are underdeveloped would continue to benefit the article, as the information is skewed towards the Italian Futurism movement.