User:Amir Rafeh/Futurism/Soniakilcoyne Peer Review

General info
Amir Rafeh
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Amir Rafeh/Futurism
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Futurism

Evaluate the drafted changes
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Currently, the sandbox of this user is an itemized analysis of the main article. As I am viewing it, there are no drafts to be worked and added to the main article. However they have written that they want to add more to the science fiction section- this I think is a good start, and would add more to the Literature subsection of the article. The User has a large bibliography and everything seems to come from valid sources. These sources would be good to add to the bibliography of the main article, so even working them into citing already-existing information within the article would be helpful. Within other subsections of the article that are a bit short in comparison to the rest, like the Dance section, more written work from the user can be created.