User:Amir Rafeh/Futurism/Tuo68169 Peer Review

General info
Amir Rafeh
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Amir%20Rafeh/Futurism?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The user has not written anything in the sandbox that can be directly moved over to the article itself, but has a very strong explanation of their goals and plans for their contributions, as well as a detailed analysis of their view on the article. In their bibliography the user has made a well-researched list of sources, all of which the user has verified as being reliable and would be a beneficial contribution to their writing. Overall, I think the user has a strong basis to begin writing, and a clear idea of their plans, but would benefit from beginning to incorporate the sources and ideas into the article itself.