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The Russian Association of Proletarian Writers were associated with Russian Futurists during the 1920's in relation to the Futurists theory of "Literature of fact," where Soviet art can be expressed through literacy evolution

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The Futuristic movement also influenced the concept of dance. Indeed, dancing was interpreted as an alternative way of expressing man's ultimate fusion with the machine. The altitude of a flying plane, the power of a car's motor and the roaring loud sounds of complex machinery were all signs of man's intelligence and excellence which the art of dance had to emphasize and praise. This type of dance is considered futuristic since it disrupts the referential system of traditional, classical dance and introduces a different style, new to the sophisticated bourgeois audience.

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Dancing was shown to be an influence to the Futuristic movement, where it was another way of expressing man's ultimate fusion with the machine. Instances such as a plane flying, or the power and sound of a car's motor and machinery where all signs of men's intelligence and excellence which the art of dance emphasizes and praises. This type of dance introduces a different style and is new to he sophisticated bourgeois audience, where it disrupts the referential system of traditional and classical dance