User:Amirjeudy/Turbi massacre/Matt Ndirangu Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Amir Jeudy


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Amirjeudy/Turbi_massacre?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The page is well written and structured. I like that you added some good links that could direct the readers to a description and map to Marsabit town in Kenya. You also provided proper citations in your work and i think that will contribute heavily to a well constructed page. Tthe overall tone used is neutral i didnt really feel like you were taking a stance or sharing an opinion on the topic you are discussing so keep it up im sure you will have a good end product.