User:Amisere/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title
 * Lumen (anatomy)


 * Article Evaluation
 * The lumen is an essential part to biology which provides for the space for biological fluids and nutrients to move within organisms. This article at the moment is incredibly lacking, with only two sources and little to no information on the page. There is a lot of room to add sources and to expand on article. It also right now is mostly in list format so I think there is a solid need for some good writing in paragraph style. I think further explanation into the types of lumens and functions of lumens could be elaborated on.


 * Sources
 * https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC8460836/
 * https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S0960982210015897
 * https://onlinelibrary.wiley.com/doi/full/10.1111/tra.12715
 * https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC8460836/

Option 2

 * Article title
 * Marian Ewurama Addy


 * Article Evaluation
 * This article is overall a good starting point. It is very brief though and could definitely be elaborated onto more. The explanations of what research she did could be built up on a little more because at the moment they are very brief. This is also a C rated article which shows that there is some growth that needs to happen within editing the article. It is also about a very prominent female African scientist which is incredibly interesting and I'd love to help elevate her article.


 * Sources
 * https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC4202662/
 * https://pesquisa.bvsalud.org/portal/resource/pt/afr-194154

Option 3

 * Article title
 * Irina Beletskaya


 * Article Evaluation
 * This article has good bones to it; however, it has no section on any of her relevant research. It is incredibly brief and at the top it has a warning that it needs more citations and may be removed soon if it does not get more citations. Her research is in organic chemistry, a class I did extremely well in, and with my experience of reading and presenting scientific journal articles, I think I would be qualified to help add to this article.


 * Sources
 * https://quod.lib.umich.edu/a/ark/5550190.0012.807?view=pdf
 * chrome-extension://efaidnbmnnnibpcajpcglclefindmkaj/ https://link.springer.com/content/pdf/10.1023/B:RUJO.0000010203.93060.26.pdf