User:Amisere/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Biomedical engineering

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
(Briefly explain why you chose it, why it matters, and what your preliminary impression of it was.)

I chose this article because it is my major at University. I thought that since I was knowledgeable in the field that I could give good insight into it. It is important because bioengineering is a newer field of engineering and provides great amounts of medical advancements.

Evaluate the article
(Compose a detailed evaluation of the article here, considering each of the key aspects listed above. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what a useful Wikipedia article evaluation looks like.)

The lead section was very well written. It had an excellent opening sentence that wasn't redundant. There is not a description of the major sections in a clear way, but it presents a good overview of the article and a good overview of the field.

The content goes over the main subsections of the field well. I think the tissue engineering section could have been elaborated on more. There is a lot more to that subsection that just artificial organs. Pharmaceutical engineering section could also use a better paragraph that is more descriptive. It is currently only two sentences and somewhat lacking. I also found the regulatory issues section somewhat misplaced and didn't quite see its relevance to the field.

The tone of the article was very neutral and did not present any biases. It was informationally based and well written. The author(s) used good transitions as well. The sources could be updated. There were some paragraphs without any sources which is definitely an issue. Previous Wikipedia pages were linked, but I don't think that is sufficient sourcing for the facts provided.

The conversations on this talk page were not very relevant. The ratings were also not the best. There could definitely be work done to get the article from B rating to A rating because it is apart of so many different WikiProjects.