User:Amissah Samantha/Afro-Brazilian history/Jimmycarp Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Amissah Samantha


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Amissah%20Samantha/Afro-Brazilian_history?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Afro-Brazilian history

Evaluate the drafted changes
While directly quoting a source seems odd, it seems like the rest of the article also does this, so it may not be a problem. The added information is relevant and while the citation hasn't been added to the text, the information clearly stems from that reliable source. The edit has a neutral tone. The added content is also very in-depth and adds a new perspective to the article. It is also well written and free of spelling errors.