User:Amonroyr/Attitude (psychology)/Isah1998 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Amonroyr


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Amonroyr/Attitude_%28psychology%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Attitude (psychology)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead

Lead could possibly be updated to include a mention of attitude correctness and attitude clarity

Content

Your content seems relevant to the topic, but the sources used are not quite up to date. Wikipedia asks for sources published in the last 5 years. You will have to pick where the information needs to go, as in the paragraph (ex: Factors or Structure Section. Whatever makes most sense to you).

Tone and Balance

Content you would use seems neutral.

Sources and references

You correctly used a secondary source for your findings and the links work. The source is also reputable. Since your information comes from one source you only need to cite it once.

Organization

Organization still needs to be completed. Add information to specific sections of the article.

Images and Media: No images included.

Overall Impressions: The information you found seems to be a useful addition to the article. Overall, more references could be added to help with relevancy, as well as more up to date references.