User:Amonroyr/Attitude (psychology)/Kvhurley28 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Amonroyr


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Amonroyr/Attitude_%28psychology%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Attitude (psychology)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think your "Change Section" offers a wide variety of subjects you want to cover in regards to attitude and attitude correctness. Confidence in regards to attitude is a widely known subsection of attitude and this would be a great way for you to go into detail about how these two are possibly correlated. These subjects you are planning on changing and expanding on will need citations, so I would encourage you to add citations from where you get your information. I think that will exponentially increase your validity and reliability. The next step would be to develop a strong lead and conclusion, as well as a body with which to present this information. I think you have a great start and you'll just need to add to it as you go!